In this great pattern of things you get  a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you actually lost everybody ended up being on the facts. You know,  it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more true right here. Having said that, let me inform you what did give good results. Your authoring is definitely pretty powerful which is most likely the reason why I am taking the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not certain of exactly how you seem to unite the details which in turn make your final result. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue however hope in the future you connect the dots better.