In this awesome pattern of things you receive  a B- with regard to effort and hard work. Where exactly you actually lost me personally was in the specifics. You know,  people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be more accurate here. Having said that, allow me inform you just what did work. Your text is extremely engaging and that is probably the reason why I am making the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can easily see a jumps in reasoning you make, I am not necessarily confident of exactly how you appear to connect your ideas that produce the final result. For right now I will, no doubt yield to your issue however wish in the future you connect your dots better.